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PostSubject: Suicidal-short story!   Mon Apr 19, 2010 11:04 am

The wind howls on my face as i stare out at the view below...i watch the world in action,the cars go by the people pass,everything seems normal...
but everything for me is not normal,today's the day my lover died.I watch in sadness as my heart bleeds,ever since that day it hasn't stop.She was
beautiful,the way her silky blond hair used to blow up in the wind and her cheeks then went rosy,and when she danced she was as light as a feather,moving
majestically around in the room,oh how i miss my Becca the girl who made my life complete..now I'm just an empty space with nothing as my future.I want to be with her,
up in heaven where everything will go back to just me and her against the world,like it used to be.


If only i had seen that truck,if only i could have saved her,if i had just reminded her to keep the seat belt on this would never have happened,its all my fault i am the cause for poop Becca's death
and for that i can not forgive myself.
IT MUST END!
My heart feels like it is fighting with my head,i don't know if i am to jump or to not jump,i feel so mixed up,everything in my life had went wrong,went downhill.I looked out to the bottom of the building,
i feel scared and the jump looks higher than expected...one jump would definitely be the end of me!.I remember my mum,and how she would re-act to my death and how upset she would be when she found out her only son
had committed suicide,her own son!.
AAARGH!
Tears run down my eyes as i think about what happened,the accident,i have to jump I HAVE TO!,it felt like an even bigger decision now...before it felt like the right choice but now.. .I stood on the edge without even
thinking,i looked out at the city,maybe for the last time ever,i noticed the building where i once grew up,where i was once taught how to read and how to write and everything else i know.I seen Becca's apartment,still with the same curtains she left
on the windows,i feel dizzy now and my legs tremble with the largest amount of fear I've ever had...i feel sick and the temptation to jump gets higher with every thought of my dear Becca.

I start to walk along a plank of wood hanging off the building,the wood was shaky and feels very unsteady,i walk to the edge,glancing down every few seconds,i then remember my family again,my mum,my dad,my sister, the worst thing to do would be leaving them.
I CANT DO IT!
I CANT.....
I....
I CANT!.

I started to walk back along the platform,suddenly the roof door opened...a women walked out
HEY WHAT ARE YOU....
NO!
The women bumped into the plank knocking it off balance.
My heart jumped and my mind is now clear
i fall through the air with pride
now ill be with you Becca
I'm coming!
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PostSubject: Re: Suicidal-short story!   Mon Apr 19, 2010 1:17 pm

It's a good story, but this sub forum is more for topics related to Clubpenguin, o.0
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PostSubject: Re: Suicidal-short story!   Mon Apr 19, 2010 2:06 pm

Nice story! Do you like writing?
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PostSubject: Re: Suicidal-short story!   Sat Apr 24, 2010 3:01 am

Awesome story Demi, is it the same as the one you posted at the "Old" forum?
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PostSubject: Re: Suicidal-short story!   Wed Apr 28, 2010 12:52 pm

yeah but noone really replied

i ahve losts more
im even in my schools newspapers every monday!
i ahve a whole 2 pages of MEEE and another page for my eco comitee Happy

im so famous lol

the teachers.....also like me....im privliged
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PostSubject: Re: Suicidal-short story!   Wed Apr 28, 2010 12:54 pm

Lol my teachers hate me.... Theres on teacher that her last name is Ms. Hamm She makes me hungry
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PostSubject: Re: Suicidal-short story!   Wed Apr 28, 2010 6:12 pm

I'm moving this to General Discussion.
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PostSubject: Re: Suicidal-short story!   Thu Apr 29, 2010 12:17 am

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Lol my teachers hate me.... Theres on teacher that her last name is Ms. Hamm She makes me hungry

i have a teacher called ms rice lol
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PostSubject: Re: Suicidal-short story!   Tue Aug 03, 2010 8:24 am

Nice story...
I think i'll move this to general discussion because this is supposed to be CLUB PENGUIN STORIES. *Moved to general discussion
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PostSubject: Re: Suicidal-short story!   Sat Aug 07, 2010 1:53 pm

awsome story Demetri
by the way i think you made a typing mistake
"poop Becca's death"
and again awsome story
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PostSubject: Re: Suicidal-short story!   Sat Aug 07, 2010 5:41 pm

hahaha sorry i cant spell!
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PostSubject: Re: Suicidal-short story!   Sun Aug 08, 2010 6:49 am

Lol poop becca. Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Suicidal-short story!   Sun Aug 08, 2010 3:21 pm

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Lol poop becca. Happy

lol! I have an awsome eye for detail so if somethings wrong my head goes into melt down trying to explain it afro
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PostSubject: Re: Suicidal-short story!   Sun Aug 08, 2010 6:27 pm

Lol Me too Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Suicidal-short story!   Mon Aug 09, 2010 2:51 am

THE NEXT BIT!
I ride in on a flying pie, save Demetri, then go kill the woman. I then drop Demetri into a matress in his home. THE END! Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Suicidal-short story!   Mon Aug 09, 2010 5:32 am

I lol'd. FLYING PIE! Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Suicidal-short story!   Mon Aug 09, 2010 5:36 am

awsome ending much better than demetri's lol!
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PostSubject: Re: Suicidal-short story!   Mon Aug 09, 2010 6:17 am

Yesh. With the flying pie. Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Suicidal-short story!   Mon Aug 09, 2010 6:32 am

lol! were did you get the flying pie from Question lol!
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PostSubject: Re: Suicidal-short story!   Mon Aug 09, 2010 6:59 am

I think he made it up. :3

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PostSubject: Re: Suicidal-short story!   Mon Aug 09, 2010 7:24 am

WHY WHY DID THE FLYING PIE HAVE TO BE MADE UP!!!! Crying or Very sad


IF YOU THINK I AMCRAZY HA HA HA FOOLED YOU lol! afro
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